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Gone, Gone, Gone

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Everything you touch
has turned to dust. It burns like
an old memory. 
Day 5 for NaPoWriMo :heart:

Inspired by "Gone,Gone,Gone" by Phillip Phillips. 

Enjoy and let me know what you think. 
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My tag was questions, I thought this was a very fitting poem, because time leaves regrets and questions.

I love the flow of this, its simple but effective, and the last line is very impactful. I appreciate the lack of 'ly' words, which tend to water down instead of enhance visual imagery.

All in all, great work!

Your tag is: Answers