Rebirth

I think the poem is really clever. I regret reading comments before finishing your poem first though (I don't know why, but I only glanced at it and then read comments before posting on the poem; for some reason I had decided on first glance already that it was a poem I would comment on to praise its quality), because someone mentioned having a baby, and now I wonder if I would've interpreted the poem as pregnancy if I wouldn't have read the association.

The second sentence bothers me a bit though. I like how you start the sentence with "joy", but I think the second "joy" comes in much too soon after the first one. I suspect it was intentional, but I don't particularly appreciate it.