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The Stirring of the Crows by *Medoriko:iconMedoriko:





Eyes of Coal
Of A Lesser Person
Sunken
Found
In A Pit of Self Sacrifice
You know you're a bit
Too Late
To Pull me Back
I could flap aimlessly
But for every ounce of emotion
Ground breaking reality
I'm pulled under
And I'm Lost
Lost
To You Entirely
Whereas I'm not Who I Once Was
Separate
Entities
Formed on a Whim
You'd take my life
As Your Own
Or Simply
You'd take my life
For My Sake
Simply because
I've lost my footing
I'm crouched
Humbly low
I'm down and Out
I'm Afraid
Air thickens with soot
And Hesitation
You tighten your Grip
The Kind that binds
Sweat of Pre-Guilt
Drip into Your Soul
Long Gone
But You fear No
God
No Retribution
None Can Stop You
When You pull the trigger
And Lips move to form
Words
I'll never Get
To hear You Say
©2008-2009 *Medoriko
:iconmedoriko:

Author's Comments

I Miss You...
When You're gone, When you're not
Even when You sit next to me, I feel as if there's something I have missed.~

Hm that line may turn into another poem xD...er wrote this yet again in class o-o; Yeah I seem to be dipping back into my depressing poems...as if i had ever left xD; Review, they're muchly appreciated. <3

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:iconbudukai:
Hmm, looks like your give some credit to crows, thats kinda cool :D Those birds never miss a thing do they :?

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God doesn't expect you to be superman :superman:, but occasionally expects you to be smartman :reading:
:iconmedoriko:
;0 wooo your alive. xD And i gotta give credit when its due :3. And just like me, they dont miss a thing :3

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Medoriko: The Ferocious Bitch <3

~ThunderCunt~
:iconbudukai:
:laughing: I haven't gone anywhere, just not much in the chats, I went one time saw you there but you were out I think, everyone else were just kicking themselves alot :O

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God doesn't expect you to be superman :superman:, but occasionally expects you to be smartman :reading:
:iconusedlotofhell:
It's depressing yes, as well as very saddening. The sound of a bullet, I'm assuming would be the next line if there indeed one.

:smooch: Inu's here for you no matter what. :)
:iconmedoriko:
Yes depressing. But not cliche :3 doesnt necessarily reflects my feelings, but i can envision someone feeling that way. Glad you liked

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Medoriko: The Ferocious Bitch <3

~ThunderCunt~
:iconmedoriko:
D8< YOU NEED TO SHOW YOURSELF....XDDD

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Medoriko: The Ferocious Bitch <3

~ThunderCunt~
:iconbig-k14:
Its good poem but I gotta ask where did you get pic from?It looks like Vampire87 work

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Rookie artist an observer
:iconmedoriko:
i got it from photobucket :0 and thanks for the review austin luff 8D

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Medoriko: The Ferocious Bitch <3

~ThunderCunt~
:iconbig-k14:
Your welcome :heart:

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Rookie artist an observer

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